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A business case is a story in six chapters. Each one causes the next. Skip one and the story breaks. The Value Story Canvas puts all six on one page, so the story you tell the CFO holds together from the cost of the problem to the return on fixing it. Enter your email and it lands in your inbox.

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Six chapters. In this order.

Current State → Investment → Capabilities → Future State → Value → Economic Return. The cost of the problem earns the right to talk about the investment. The return is only believable because of everything before it.

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1. Current State

What does the problem cost today, per year? The more detailed the better. This is the baseline every other chapter is measured against.

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2. Investment

What is the total cost of ownership? Fully loaded: license, setup, training, upkeep. A CFO will find the costs you left out, so put them in first.

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3. Capabilities

What capabilities are you offering? Talk capabilities, not your feature list. Each one should map to a cost you named in the current state.

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4. Future State

How does the business work differently? Before and after, in the client's words, not yours. If they would not say it, it does not go here.

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5. Value

What is it worth, and how confident are we? Broken down by type, with a conservative case and the main risk named out loud.

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6. Economic Return

What does the CFO get back, and why now? Payback, 3-year ROI, and the cost of delay: annual value divided by twelve, for every month you wait.

The CFO is not buying your product. They are buying the story.

56% of B2B buyers say vendors do not understand their business needs, and 79% of purchases now need CFO approval. A pitch built on features loses that room before anyone gets to the numbers. A value story starts with what the problem costs the business today, and every chapter after it follows from that. When the CFO can trace the return back to a cost they recognise, the business case stops being your claim and becomes their decision.

Find the numbers. Then check them.

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Questions that unlock the numbers

  • Fully loaded cost of one person? (1.3–1.5× salary)
  • Cost of your last quality or compliance failure?
  • Buffer stock carried, at what carrying cost?
  • Revenue at risk if the deadline is missed?
  • Hours a month lost to manual work?
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Check before you send

  • Every capability maps to a current-state cost
  • Revenue at risk is in the story, not the return
  • Value has a conservative case and a named risk
  • Cost of delay = annual value ÷ 12
  • It ends with a dated next step

About the canvas

What is in the canvas?

One A4 page. Six boxes, one for each chapter of the business case: current state, investment, capabilities, future state, value, and economic return. Each box has the question to answer and a prompt for what good looks like. Below them: five questions that unlock the numbers, and a five-point check to run before you send anything to the client.

Why does the order matter?

Because each chapter causes the next. The current-state cost justifies the investment. The capabilities explain how the future state happens. The future state is where the value comes from, and the value is what produces the return. Skip a chapter and the CFO sees the gap: a return with no cause, or a capability with no cost attached to it.

Why keep revenue at risk out of the economic return?

Revenue at risk belongs in the story, where it explains why the problem matters and why now. Counting it in the return as well inflates the number, and a finance team will spot it. Keep the return to value you can defend, with a conservative case beside it.

Where does the canvas come from?

It is the six-box Value Story from the book Fly the Deal, by Sultan Semlali, turned into a one-page tool you can fill in for a live deal.

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